After youth church service was done, nighttime has come. By
then, it was probably 7:00 P M. Seeing all the people go in cars and ride away
with their bikes, my older brother and 2 cousins wanted to walk home instead.
Here in Kalihi? A prison, housings, random shops surround us, and of course the
different variety of people we don’t know about. Being a young boy, I was
scared out of my mind. I never know how Kalihi would be dangerous. I agreed to
them because I thought to myself they would protect me. Letting my mom know was
the right thing to do, but they told me to not worry.
I was still
nervous knowing that this was my first time walking at night here in my own
neighborhood. Although, we decided to
walk, they wanted to stay longer. Seeing my bro talk to people, two cousins
playing ball with the hoop they had, I felt we weren’t going to walk home but
instead get picked up. I told them let’s go, looking at my phone it was 9 o
clock. My phone filled with missed calls by my mom. My brother texted back, lying,
and saying we were getting dropped off by friends. I just wanted to go home
already.
As I was
going to text my mom what happened, he said finally said all their good byes
and we started walking away from church properties. During our walk in Kalihi,
hardly any other people were walking at this time. My heart beating fast in
this dark environment, all of our phones were dead. We had to finish the walk
without getting picked up. I have seen couple of people laying down on the
floor, people who didn’t look normal, and people doing their own typical things
that I see during the day. I knew these people were unfortunate; their lives
were harsh, nothing that I could compare to them.
We tried
walking the safest direction, but everywhere was still the same. My cousin
joked to me saying to get away, why are you even wearing red. Thinking in mind
why red is bad. We got closer to the street where I live. My brother told me
lets cross through KPT. I didn’t event know that place was even dangerous or
safe. But I knew not to agree. We continued to walk and I still questioned why
red is so bad since I was wearing red shoes and a slipper. One of my cousin
told me to walk all bad, jokingly I did. A man across the street suddenly
yelled at us saying “you one blood yea, HI! You think your bad? Come here!” I
questioned myself what’s a blood. The man in light blue continued to say these
things and started to walk faster towards us. The first person to run was my
bro. After that we all started running. I turned around, 2 other guys were with
that horrid man, staring and sticking the unnecessary finger. W
We ran home
as fast as we could. Everything on my mind was “what just happened” Realizing
what these people are and what they go through, I don’t want my lifestyle to
end up like that. I told my mom the story and the first thing she told me…”Get
out of Kalihi and move to the mainland.”
NEED TO GIVE US A LITTLE MORE BACK INFO TO STORY, HOW OLD WERE YOU AND WHEN WAS THIS EVENT. AVOID SLANG LIKE BRO IF IT IS NOT NECESSARY. ALSO PLEASE READ THROUGH YOUR WORK THERE ARE SOME GRAMMATICAL AND SENTENCE ERRORS THAT MAKE SOME SENTENCES AWKWARD OR DIFFICULT TO READ. AND LASTLY WHAT IS THE POINT OF THE STORY? YOU GAVE US AN EXPERIENCE BUT WHAT DID YOU LEARN FROM IT? HOW DID YOU COME OF AGE? AS(1)
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