After a unsatisfying day, stress and angerness would just flow throughout me.. Having hard work of school, constint nagging, or unfavorable actions made by others, I just want my alone time. I wait all day to have the living room all to myself. After doing sweaty chores, homework, showering, and a filling dinner, my family is out of the living room.
Even though it's not a room with all high tech tv, big stereos, or a/c, a kitchen right behind me, a ps3 system, tv, couch, and daming chair is all I need for a relaxing place. Bad day has ended, let down emotions has gone away, relaxation and gaming experience had me think away from the terribl day that has came to me.
I remember my mom waking up for a glass of water. She saw me sitting there, focused on the tv while it was on, COD was all I did from night to early morning. My mom used to get mad and say to me that is all I do then homework. I told her ''this relaxes me and makes happy again" Every Friday and Saturday I would be in my special place, the stars in sight, the chill breeze, the kitchen that's close, and tv to yourself, and also cod all night is a simple dream that's reality.
1 thing you should do to fix this essay is tell us what cod stands for and what it is because some readers might not know what COD is
ReplyDeleteI think you used the word relax to much in your essay. The reason why that's a bad thing is cause readers don't like reading repeating words. It gets boring. But besides that your essay is very well detailed. I could see you, in my head, actually playing COD in your bed room.
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