Teen trends online such as video games or social media can cause the
actions of teens to be reckless and their decisions making to be what everyone
else does. Teens will also want to attract themselves to others.
In
the online world, it is a great place to express the vision of them without
having to do it in person. Teens can follow up on what they see all over the
Internet and can join the trend anytime they want. On social networking such as
vine, YouTube, or instagram, you can make new friends and even set a new idea
of how someone thinks of you. About 93% of teens according to PewResearchCenter
go online everyday. These people are open to the new mindset of the generation
and will be likely to dress, and try new things what everyone else are doing.
When there are good things happening there are cons to these situations. It may
risk your life, your attitude, and even the relationships you have with people.
Online shopping has brought 35.6 million people to buying their clothes and
merchandises online. About 50% of people said that social media influenced them
to buy online. A lot of these teens aren’t loyal to the brands that they buy
and buy a different variety of clothing. Many of them wants to dress like the
people that are known and dress like what everyone that you see in the malls or
when you go out with friends. Top sites like amazon or Nike targets these teens
and promote it so everyone would crave for it. Online shopping isn’t
right for people because anyone can buy anything to have the “in-thing”. They
shouldn’t change what they wear because of looking different then anyone else.
Online shopping also has its good side because many people can buy things for
cheap when buying the same item in their community is twice as much. It helps
family have a higher standard of living.
A
huge trend that is growing in the world is video games. About 67% of U.S house
holds play video games. When people play it allows them to express and release their
feelings in the virtual world. Teens playing violent games such as Call of duty
increase their aggressive thoughts and their feeling of empathy towards other.
Video games shouldn’t be played a lot which makes the teen get addicted to it
and wont be useful of what they could be doing.
Teen
Trends online effects what the teens do. When one trend dies, a new one will
always pop up. When people try to stay original, they aren’t because that
person is copying someone that they think is cool. They dress and do the things
that other teens whose popular are doing.
Sincerely,
Tyler Ambrocio
Sincerely,
Tyler Ambrocio
I would suggest writing to one company/business about one specific topic that has been a problem for you. Just elaborate more on ONE complaint yo~ <3
ReplyDeleteYou have many good statistics but a little bit too much. You need to follow the format and share your own experience towards your topic.
ReplyDeleteNarrow it down to your own opinion and not to much facts. Tell a story or explain why you think this. Overall a good topic though.
ReplyDeleteYour complaint is not clear and readers are confused on what you are actually complaining about. Pick one topic/company and write to them. And looking over the letter I am not sure who you are writing to. You have to figure what you want to complain about or write a letter of concern to and then write to them. Dont forget to add research and reasoning. AS(1-)
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